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[禁忌之恋] 【我的岳母】14

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确实写的很好，主线情节进入的很快。很少有这种进入很快。角色不多还能一直有新鲜感。。。说到底还是文笔好。后面可以尽量写一点冲突效果，为了更好递进效果，说不定能更上一层楼。当然，我说的冲突不包括虐。是剧情的冲突。比如误会之类的
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