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[征文作品] ［武侠］「２００９文心雕龙」「剑恨情迷后传 屠城末路」（连载中）（70号作品）

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很好的文章,文笔清晰,构思也很庞大.
尤其是情色描写虽然少却是文笔好的很,各种感觉和欲望都写出来了.
看得出文章伏笔也很多,希望作者能坚持.
不过提点小意见:文章的情色江湖和清明斗争结合得不太好.
给人感觉本文由两条主脉络.
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