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[征文作品] 【色城２０１０文心雕龙】【诡色之枯叶蝶】（105号）

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貌似和人妻的关系不是很大,但是荡神大大的创意还好,不过一个人四五十公斤,还热的,味道估计也不同,而人一般都会有斑和痣之类的,如果改成老板老婆被人报复注射了药剂不能动然后骗几个农民工进去老板老婆被当成充气娃娃也许会和人妻有些关联,总体来说还算不错,也不说太多虚的了,希望荡神大大创作出更多好作品.
对了,题目孤叶蝶我觉得写成女盗贼被抓住殴打然后装死再被看守的工人上了,临近天亮逃脱了也许更贴切枯叶蝶的意思.

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